The introduction organizes the body of the paper well. Establishing the topic discussed and telling the reader what they’re about to read. However, the introduction could have included more about the quilt’s involvement in her decision to choose Military and HIV/AIDS, instead of say Mickey mouse or say Disney and HIV/AIDS. She also could have explained her research process more. The evidence used were policies from the national government displaying why the connection between HIV/AIDS, and the military. The use of policies as evidence gives a deeper understanding of her ethos and brings a connection between the military and gay culture as well as AIDS/HIV.